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      Why honest is important?      
   ۼ   ksh040203       2016-01-14
   
 

I think honest is important. Becuase we did lie, people are didn't believe anytime. Then, we are called lier. I think it's bad thing. When, we honest. People are believe anytime. And we're life is change very good. So, my opinion is I think honest is very important for our lifes. Then, I did honest more and more time.

             I think being honest is important because if we are lying people won't believe in us anymore. Then,we will be called liars and it's a bad thing to do.When we are honest, people will trust us and will believe to what we are saying. It makes our life good and so I will be honest all the time.

  • becuase is spelled as because
  • liers is spelled as liars
  • You can say because if we are lying people won't believe in us anymore instead of saying "because we did lie,people are didn't lie."
  • You can also say I will be honest all the time instead of saying " I did honest more and more time."

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