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- It should be why do people lie instead of using does because the word people is plural.
- deracter is spelled as director
- disign is spelled as design
- You don't say people are not lie. You can say "not all people are liars but there are only some."
- Some advertisements are exaggerated not exaggerative advertisement.
- Instead of saying "And the pizza shop said we're pizza is very delicious and large and have many side menu." You can say The pizza shop advertised that their pizza is delicious and large.
- Also, you don't say "And people is buy it, they're fall for pizza shop. You can say, people will buy in their pizza shop
- You can say so I think lying is bad instead of saying "So, I think lie is bad."
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