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I promise something to my parents. Becuase this year, I'm 13 years old. I'm in the 6 grade. Then, next year I'm 14 years old. I go to the middle school. I thknk middle school is very important place. Because when I go to the college, it will study about middle school math, science, English, and so on. (But it's more harder then middle school.) So, I think in the middle school, I will study very harder. Then, I promise when I go to middle school, I study very hard and have a good grade. I can do it. I will didn't broken this promise never ever.
I had promised something to my parents because this year I'm 13 years old and in the 6th grade.I will be turning 14 years old and I will be in the middle school by that time. I think middle school is very important. When I reach college, I will be studying the subjects Math, Science, English,and so on but then, it's more harder than middle school.I promise I will study very hard and will have good grades. I know I can do it and I will not break my promise to them.
- becuase is spelled as because
- I'm turning 14 years old next year and I will be in middle school already instead of " next year I'm 14 years old. I go to the middle school."
- 6th grade instead of 6 grade
- thknk is spelled as think
- You can say I will study very hard instead of " I will study very harder"
- I will not break my promise to them instead of " I will didn't broken this promise never ever"
- " but it's more harder than middle school instead of " but it's more harder then middle school"
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